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Like a bee kisses
a flower. Come here, Stranger,
and pollinate me.
©2008-2009 ~malapropity
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:iconkenart22:
one thing about this it will defintely catch the eye

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It caught yours. Hopefully in a positive way... :P
:iconvampire-zombie:
really great haikus you have here so far. they are definitely harder to write than they look. and i agree with the other comment too, this one catches your eye. and in a god way of course =)

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Haikus are different. That's for sure.
I'm happy you enjoyed mine! Thank you for the favorite! And the watch!
:iconvampire-zombie:
its no problem =)

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:iconkenart22:
Before now I wasnt sure about the effect of a poems length on its overall appeal.I think yours has taught me that it does
have its place

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God loves you.

'Look into my eyes. what do you see'
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Did you think shorter poems were less appealing?
I thought a haiku was the perfect medium of expression. The shortness mirrors the subject's... attention span, making it work.
:iconkenart22:
Hmm I think I did , when it comes to poems I am high on being expressive but dont really know to much about the techniques
which in a way is a positive because you arent limited by them .But I have learned from this though.Each kind of poem
I know now has its own should i say ,voice, and none may be better than the other.Just a question of the poets skill
in utilizing each to best effect .

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God loves you.

'Look into my eyes. what do you see'
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Beautiful. I agree completely.

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